Sunday, February 8, 2009

A fairly new poem. What do you think?

Inevibility

Waiting for the spotted dog beside me
to be gone, skinless bones buried
under yard trees in perfect grass
we mow and mourn.

Waiting for the father down the road
to finish his fit, at 87,
draped in a flag, tagged out
as if in a game of catch.

Waiting for endings of all beginnings
To wrap our lives in
garments whole and safe as armor,
shielding from the naked chill of loss.

3 comments:

  1. Wow, poignant and honest. I feel like I'm always right there, ready for the next loss.

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  2. Judy, I hope you come back and check my blog. Ashamedly, I must admit that I haven't been here in quite a while. I had to comment, though. Would you believe that you made THIS comment on THIS day--the day my 90 year-old father died. Eerie. Thanks for your comment.

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  3. Teresa--we mow and mourn, what a wonderful line. And the entire poem so strong. I haven't forgotten you. Now that I'm no longer laureate, let's get back to our conversation! love, K

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